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BurningAlbino Featured By Owner May 6, 2017
THAT FACE THO !!!
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SilverMuttt Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is she pregnant? 0-0
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DJTYN3 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2016  Student Filmographer
I've noticed that you seem to have a lot of spelling and grammar errors within the first several pages. The artwork looks good but the grammar could use some work. 
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Misstyx Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Thinking thinking what to do?
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notthemosttalented Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"I should go for the butterfly"

Yeah, 'cause butterflies totally carry more protein than rabbits.

Screw rabbits, bugs are better. XD
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Lily37797 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2017
Hehe.
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Suopert Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Hobbyist
This is so cool! :D I like it :D
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! Thank you so much! :D I'm glad you do! ^^
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Suopert Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2014  Hobbyist
No problem :)
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caty132 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
love youre art so verry mutch and the storry line its all perfect. 
i cant understand how you can draw so good.
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OH gosh! ;0; Thank you soooooo very much hun! <333 I'm really, really happy, and honored, that you think so! ;v;
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caty132 Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
youre welcome its funny to see how you gets better and better i mean ist it funny to see how mutch better the drawings are now and then looke at the old version of twoe. (the drawings from the old version are also sooooooo great) 
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neko-systeme Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
Aaaah I love this page x3 It looks so sweet and awesome :love: 

The first panel is beautiful :heart: Meya's expression is ... awesome xD It's really easy to tell what she's thinking. She looks lazy but cool xD The colors are really beautiful too, they all fit well together, and they're not too saturated, so it gives really a nice look ! ^o^ I think the lines aren't black, am I correct ? x'D (Maybe you did them more small, I don't know ...) ,  Anyway, they look awesome too ! And they fit well with Meya's color ! :D I love the shadings too, you respected really well the light source ! :')

Second panel ... I love the perspective ^o^ And it's hard to draw so small, but you did it amazing o.O I love the way you did the grass too, so fluffy and cool ! Meya is such a lazy-ass xD You know that a butterfly isn't really nutritive ? xD 

Third, hehe ! I love the nose textures ! They are awesome and look real ! Again, beautiful perspective :D The tongue and the inside of the mouth really have their own, good texture ^o^ They look wet because of the light effect, and that gives a really nice look ! The shadings of the teeth are awesome too. Meya looks like she can't wait to eat that butterfly xD Even though a butterfly isn't very yummy. 

Fourth panel ! Now, Meya is having ''brave'' mood on ! (What ? But she needs courage to hunt that poor rabbit xD) Her expression is PRICELESS ! You're the best to make expressions xD I like the position of the mouth, it really well thought ^o^ And the fact that one eye is closed a bit more than the other xD Haha ! 

The two last panels are really good too ! The zoom on the paw and eye gives a really nice composition to the page, and there's a lot of details in those little panel. They give a quiet moment before Meya's powerful attack ! (I guess she will attack the rabbit xD) I like that you made the grass darker in this panel, because Meya's shadow is making it darker (: So it looks natural. I also like the white line at the left of the eyes. 

Anyway, you make such a nice comic ^o^ I really like it ! I also like the fact that the speech bubbles are transparent, it gives a really nice look, like the white text, wow ! (; It's really well thought ! You make an amazing job so far, keep on your nice work !

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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG!! *________________*

Thank you soooooOOOOOoooOOOOOO much for your massive comment 'o sweetness! ;v; :heart: I'm really happy that you like it that much!! <33333
The lines are black, but thinner than before! :D Now I draw her with the line thickness of 0.3. ;3
And I'm also happy that you like the expressions! :la: It's something I've been working loads on! ^v^ 
Once again, thank you SOOOO much for taking your time and write this wonderful comment! ;w; I, as always, really appreciate it!! <333
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha! Meya makes the best faces! XD I love her expressions in panels 1 and 4! XD
And the lighting in this is so beautiful, it's spot-on for the scene! 8D

Uh-oh, Meya, watch out! If you go into the thornbush, you'll get hurt D8
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! I'm really glad to hear that! ;D lol I tend to make the faces of the characters I draw as I draw them, so you can imagine what I looked like then. x'D
Thank you soooo very much! :icondragonglomp: It means a lot to me! :hug:

Oh yes! She would! D8 Let's hope she doesn't! 38
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahaha! I fully understand you! I make faces all the time while I draw XDDDD

And no problem at all my dear^^
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Scyilla Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Just TRY Meya, Jesus, I'm guessing she gives up easily in times like this :P
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uniccin Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist
there is the page! :D

I love the expression xD hilarious! ^^
and the panel where you can see the teeth and tongue!
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KentLaiton Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Loving the expressions, and that tongue looks really good! xD
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! Thank you so much! ;D I'm glad to hear that!
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KentLaiton Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome!
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Gwij Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, insects are a sure source of protein and iron! 

Why not give that butterfly a shot, eh? :iconlooolplz:
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yup! Meya should totally go for it! 
 
lol xD
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KahlaWolf Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dat tongue. :) 

I'm lovin it!!! ^u^
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! xD
Thank you so much! :D
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Zeruma Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Kom igen Meya! Hoppa på tre!
EAtt.. Tvåeh.. Trai!... awh. :| (Blank Stare)
Snyggt Sally-swan! Gillar Meya's min på den 4:de rutan. 030
Snyggt gräs också.Nod  (gillar tungan av ngn anledning... xD)
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kaschill7 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Professional Writer
you might want a comma before 'for sure.' but it's not necessary i think
"no way I'll* follow it"
"I'd have a better chance with it"
"uh-uh" though i guess you could use huh-uh it's a little confusing
"what am I thinking?"

a butterfly will not fill you up meya! XD
maybe it doesn't like thorns either and you'll be able to corner it o.o
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm, okay, thank you! :D I'll fix it a bit then. ;) "Huh-uh" was meant to be like: nope or a mumbling denial, if you understand me. x3 It was something I used to do a while ago, you know, putting that into my sentences depending on if it was a yes: uh-huh or no: huh-uh. A lazy way of saying yes or no more or less. x3

Nope, it won't. xD
Hoho! Maybe! :D Let's hope for that! :D
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kaschill7 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Professional Writer
oooh i get it XD we always write it as "nah-uh" "nuh-uh" or "uh-uh" but it's pretty much the same thing, i guess it's just another way of writing it ^^;

XD silly meya
onward meya! XD yea let's hope it works like a trap and without meya having to even set up!
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KiddWulf Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

that face :D nice job!!


im curious..what drawing program do you use to draw on?

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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! Thank you! ;D

I draw in Paint Tool Sai and Photoshop CS7. :]
I do the lineart, coloring and background in Sai, and the special-effects + speech-bubbles in Photoshop. ^^
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KiddWulf Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Im thinking about going to paint tool SAI, I hear a lot of good things about it. And GIMP..just confuses me waay too much. Even when I look up tutorials and stuff im still confused..and the layer thing I can never work it right.. Dx oh nice! do you have to pay for Photoshop?
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It really is good! :D And the lineart is the best part, it becomes really smooth and clean. ^w^
Haha! I've tried Gimp too. Let's say it like this: Been there, done that. Didn't understand it. xD lol
I got Photoshop for free from my father who was an art teacher. :D
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KiddWulf Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, that awesome ^^ yeah its so confusing. Im going to ask my mom I fi can delete GIMP and download SAI instead. Oh, nice! :D
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lili85245 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
C'mon ! Go, Meya, go 8D
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay! Go Meya! \(^0^)/
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canis-lupe Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014
Really beautiful athmosphere :love:
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww, thank you so much! :hug:
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canis-lupe Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
 welcome c:
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Seffly Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014

XD her expression in the 1st and 4th panels

Amazing job, Sally. You've improved so much with anatomy:)

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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! I'm glad you like it! ;D
Aww, thank you so much! ^w^ I'm happy to hear that!
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Seffly Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
Haha you're welcome! ^v^
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