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First Page: sally-ce.deviantart.com/art/TW…

Previous chapter: Chapter 4 - Reunion

Next chapter: Chapter 6 - Accursed






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Story, comic, characters and artwork © Sally-Ce 
Translation help by kaschill7

Personal note:
OUR INTERNET IS BACK!! :D Oh gosh... right in time too since I graduated yesterday!! :la: (Which means I cannot use the school's internet anymore.) And that is also why I couldn't submit a page yesterday. There was just too much going on. :'> But now it's here, enjoy! <3333
ps. Something you don't have to mention if you're gonna write a critique, is that Zarhe's shadow is missing on Meya. I noticed it just now and have no time to fix it... So yeah, I AM aware of it. :'>
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:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Another wonderful page for a wonderful comic. The art is - as always- solid and just endearing. There's never a page that shows a jump in lighting or quality to the previous (unless intended, of course, such as a jump from late night to sundown). I really like how you've managed to blend the sort of canine facial anatomy and human facial expressions for the characters. It's the first comic I've seen that does this well.

As for the writing and script of the comic, for the longest time I wasn't too shure about it. It actually reminded me of another comic that is discontinued as of yet, in that it has great art, but the story seemed somewhat hard to figure out.
This is mostly due to the fact that not a lot has happened in the comic yet. We don't know anything that's going on and the central storyline has yet to be revealed to us. (Unless you're a pschologist genious and figured it out months ago.)
Instead of rushing the story along this comic takes its time to develop the interaction between the characters and show who they really are and what they're like.

Having said that, the last page cleared all my doubts. Seeing as everybody was kind of chanting for Zarhe to get mauled (which, if you've read enough comics/ seen enough anime would have been the reasonable followup), you really surprised me.
You really did the one thing the least people expected, which leads me to think that I really don't need to worry about the plot.

I have the utmost faith in your imagination and ideas.

So keep up this awesome work!


PS: One page per week, fairly consistent. You're pretty dedicated, so good on you!

Five stars everywhere. Yes, I know that looks kind of fishy. It's my opinion though!