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Previous chapter: Chapter 2 - The Chained Canine

Next chapter: Chapter 4 - Reunion

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

YAY, critique finally! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt=":la:" title="La la la la"/>

I'm sorry it took so long <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt=":P" title=":P (Lick)"/> As usual, I'm really impressed by the layout and overall flow of the page, it's very well done and it flows really nicely! I can spot little to no mistakes at all! Really well done!

Panel 1: I love Snatch's pose turning towards Tacoro <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> It moves all the focus on him, and his pose and paler colour give him all the attention, really good!

Panel 2: Also very well done! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt=":la:" title="La la la la"/> The picture is clear and we can see the size difference between Snatch and Tacoro! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> Hoho, Snatch is huge! XD

Panels 3-4-5: TA-CO-ROOOOOO! XDD Definitely my favourite moment in the entire comic! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/r/r…" width="29" height="27" alt=":rofl:" title="rofl"/> Tacoro is absolutely cute! XD I love how you made the sequence, you even made his lips move according to what he said! Great! The only little issue is in the third panel of the sequence, panel 5. While in panels 3 and 4 Tacoro is seen friom a side and with a frontal perspective, in panel 5, the perspective suddenly moves up and we see him from above. Despit the effect it gives is really nice, i think the movement is a little too fast, and it would have worked even better if panel 5 was in frontal perspective and side view like the other two <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> But that doesn't make it less awesome and cute! Tacoro is adorable ^_^

Panels 6-7: Once again, very well done! I don't spot any mistakes in composition here, the flow of speech bubbles is also really good <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> Oh Tacoro! XDDDD

Panels 7-8: Fantastic job here too! Wow, I'm finding it really hard to spot mistakes, this page is nearly perfect! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt=":la:" title="La la la la"/> The only minor thing here is Meya's front left foot, I think it's a little too far from the other foot, it gives me a slight impression that Meya is struggling to find her balance. But that's a really minor thing <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

Panel 9: It's pure epic. Nuff said! Beautiful expression, beautiful colouring, and Meya's intense stare is awesome! Really well done!