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TWOE_Page-53_Ch-3 by Sally-Ce TWOE_Page-53_Ch-3 by Sally-Ce
Hi people of the earth! :D
I`m here to announce, that it is precisely one year today since I joined dA! :party: :cake:
I'm so happy! ^^ One year with great friend and tons of support! :aww: I want to say that I love you all! :hug:

I tried to get this page done just for this special day! ^^

So! About the page. :3 All the characters resents themselves. Tacoro has, as always, his own way to do things. So instead of just saying his mane, he makes some kind of gesture. xD Tacoro you silly wolf! xD

And Snatch, if you want Meya to be your friend, you shouldn't call her "babe". o3o



Please write a critique! I really appreciate it! :heart:



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YAY, critique finally! :la:

I'm sorry it took so long :P As usual, I'm really impressed by the layout and overall flow of the page, it's very well done and it flows really nicely! I can spot little to no mistakes at all! Really well done!

Panel 1: I love Snatch's pose turning towards Tacoro :) It moves all the focus on him, and his pose and paler colour give him all the attention, really good!

Panel 2: Also very well done! :la: The picture is clear and we can see the size difference between Snatch and Tacoro! :D Hoho, Snatch is huge! XD

Panels 3-4-5: TA-CO-ROOOOOO! XDD Definitely my favourite moment in the entire comic! :rofl: Tacoro is absolutely cute! XD I love how you made the sequence, you even made his lips move according to what he said! Great! The only little issue is in the third panel of the sequence, panel 5. While in panels 3 and 4 Tacoro is seen friom a side and with a frontal perspective, in panel 5, the perspective suddenly moves up and we see him from above. Despit the effect it gives is really nice, i think the movement is a little too fast, and it would have worked even better if panel 5 was in frontal perspective and side view like the other two :) But that doesn't make it less awesome and cute! Tacoro is adorable ^_^

Panels 6-7: Once again, very well done! I don't spot any mistakes in composition here, the flow of speech bubbles is also really good :) Oh Tacoro! XDDDD

Panels 7-8: Fantastic job here too! Wow, I'm finding it really hard to spot mistakes, this page is nearly perfect! :la: The only minor thing here is Meya's front left foot, I think it's a little too far from the other foot, it gives me a slight impression that Meya is struggling to find her balance. But that's a really minor thing :)

Panel 9: It's pure epic. Nuff said! Beautiful expression, beautiful colouring, and Meya's intense stare is awesome! Really well done!
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The-Traveler-735 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*GASP* I LOVE the last panel. She looks so beautiful~!!!
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:glomp: I'm really glad that you do! ;v; Thanks a ton! :D
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xXGodsGirl757Xx Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
TA-CO-ROOO!
So cute <3
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! ;3 Thank you! :heart:
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InTimber Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
The second panel is just so adorable!! Hi there little buddy what's your name! Love Hug 
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! Aww.. I'm glad you like it that much! :'3 :heart:
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Pikachix Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
Aw, Tacoro is just so cute ^^
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Maw.. I'm really glad that you think so!! ;v;
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Shadowflarewolfrp13 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
Meya's words.... 'My mane is not 'babe'' lol XD
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha! Gosh, it'd been hilarious if she accidentally said that instead! :'D
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