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ONWARD_Page-1_Ch-1 by Sally-Ce<< Previous - Next >> ONWARD_Page-3_Ch-1 by Sally-Ce

Next chapter: Chapter 2 - The chained canine


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Akalu's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

First of all, I'm no master at writing critiques :I But I'm trying to anyway!
This is a really good page. I adore the athmosphere and everything, and you really captured the wolf perfectly! Especially the first panel, perfect anatomy! And the eyes, I love that effect, very realistic!
But there is one thing I'd change; In the last panel, the sky looks a bit rushed. Maybe you should've made more stars but with a little bit less opacity? Or given the clouds a bit more detail? With exception of that I can't really point out any other mistakes! This is still a very beautiful page! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="26" height="17" alt=":love:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="276" title="Love"/>