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YAY, critique finally! :la:

I'm sorry it took so long :P As usual, I'm really impressed by the layout and overall flow of the page, it's very well done and it flows really nicely! I can spot little to no mistakes at all! Really well done!

Panel 1: I love Snatch's pose turning towards Tacoro :) It moves all the focus on him, and his pose and paler colour give him all the attention, really good!

Panel 2: Also very well done! :la: The picture is clear and we can see the size difference between Snatch and Tacoro! :D Hoho, Snatch is huge! XD

Panels 3-4-5: TA-CO-ROOOOOO! XDD Definitely my favourite moment in the entire comic! :rofl: Tacoro is absolutely cute! XD I love how you made the sequence, you even made his lips move according to what he said! Great! The only little issue is in the third panel of the sequence, panel 5. While in panels 3 and 4 Tacoro is seen friom a side and with a frontal perspective, in panel 5, the perspective suddenly moves up and we see him from above. Despit the effect it gives is really nice, i think the movement is a little too fast, and it would have worked even better if panel 5 was in frontal perspective and side view like the other two :) But that doesn't make it less awesome and cute! Tacoro is adorable ^_^

Panels 6-7: Once again, very well done! I don't spot any mistakes in composition here, the flow of speech bubbles is also really good :) Oh Tacoro! XDDDD

Panels 7-8: Fantastic job here too! Wow, I'm finding it really hard to spot mistakes, this page is nearly perfect! :la: The only minor thing here is Meya's front left foot, I think it's a little too far from the other foot, it gives me a slight impression that Meya is struggling to find her balance. But that's a really minor thing :)

Panel 9: It's pure epic. Nuff said! Beautiful expression, beautiful colouring, and Meya's intense stare is awesome! Really well done!
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Mortthecat Featured By Owner Edited Mar 29, 2015
can I just call him taco?
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! Sure! ;)
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Mortthecat Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015
I love your art by the way!
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TheWildSide504 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2015  New member
is Meya male or female?
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
She's female! :)
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Sephiroth8745 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
okay two questions.
1. why does Tacoro keep doing that? saying his name in a dramatic fashion?
2. wait the dude who got infected wasn't a dude? he's a chick!? O.o
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
1: He just does. There isn't really an explanation for it. :) … yet anyway. 
2: Yep, she was a female all along! ^v^
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Sephiroth8745 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015
why do i get the feeling Meya is gonna have a close relationship with Tacoro? if there is gonna be one anyway.
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I cannot say it due to spoilers, but it's fun to hear speculations like this from readers. ^v^
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Sephiroth8745 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015
though at the same time i highly doubt it due to Tacoro's personality.
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The-Traveler-735 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*GASP* I LOVE the last panel. She looks so beautiful~!!!
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:glomp: I'm really glad that you do! ;v; Thanks a ton! :D
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xXGodsGirl757Xx Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
TA-CO-ROOO!
So cute <3
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! ;3 Thank you! :heart:
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InTimber Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
The second panel is just so adorable!! Hi there little buddy what's your name! Love Hug 
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! Aww.. I'm glad you like it that much! :'3 :heart:
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Pikachix Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
Aw, Tacoro is just so cute ^^
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Maw.. I'm really glad that you think so!! ;v;
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Shadowflarewolfrp13 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
Meya's words.... 'My mane is not 'babe'' lol XD
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha! Gosh, it'd been hilarious if she accidentally said that instead! :'D
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Shadowflarewolfrp13 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
OH SHIZZ! I meant name. How did I do that?
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CalmingInsanity Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
I loved this! I love when he announced his name like that. XD But not trying to be rude, but the crow kinda looks like it was pasted on there. But I'm reading every single comic and you have impoved greatly! :D.
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, I am truly happy you liked it! :D Tacoro is Tacoro, as always. xD

No, no! You're not rude! ^^ I want to improve, and I cannot do that if no one never points things out for me. :aww: So I am grateful! :hug: :D

Aww, thanks a lot! :D I am glad to hear that! ^^
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CalmingInsanity Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013
Oh, and I can see where Maya is coming from. I don't like when people I barly know call me things like "sweetheart" xD
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XXStigerstar Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
wow looking back from page number 1 you improved a ton! I LOVE THIS COMIC
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my, thank you so very much! :hug: :D
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XXStigerstar Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
your very welcome :D
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug: :D
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Zeituni Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Student General Artist
Great that they finally represented themselves :) Tacoro's style is so special and funny :D
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah! :D You have no idea how long I waited to make this page! xD
You think so? Haha! That's great then! :D It's what I aimed for all along. ;)
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lili85245 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
4 panel : His face xDD He lokks like he ate a fly XD
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! Maybe he did? ;D Hahahaha!
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Dragoness17 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This page is beautiful x3 Enjoying this comic greatly.

The only thing that bugs me is Fledge's panel. Although I do know how hard it is drawing birds, especially front on. I'm currently practicing drawing a griffon character in different angles, and front on is by far the hardest. I think I may have found another source of inspiration for my graphic novel ^_^ (Arven92 is the other).
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thank you truly much! :aww: I really appreciate that you read it! ^^

Mm, I'm not happy with it either. xD I really suck at birds. But I keep trying! ^^

OH MYYY! 8D I'm honored! *blushes* I'm so very happy to hear that! :hug:
And Arven92 is a great person with huge imagination indeed! :D It was a great choice of inspiration. ^^
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lili85245 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Tacoro is crazy, don't he ? xD
I love tour comic so much !
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! Yes he is! xD

Oh my, thank you so much! :hug:
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KiruRaki Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Tacoro is so cute when he shouts out Roooo
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:icontacoroplz::iconsaysplz: ROOOO! 8D

Haha! Thank you so much! ^^
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wolfXDlove Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
my name ? .. my name is not babe is meya XDDDDD
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! Indeed! xD
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wolfXDlove Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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milovanf Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
4th panel... BIIIIIIIIIIIIIG Doggy eyes he has. and cutie too either.
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YESSSSSS! :love: Thank you so much! ^^
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milovanf Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
You are very WELCOME! ^^ :winner:
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:glomp:
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KayaWolf0612 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
I love the "rooooo" face! :D Silly Tacarooooo! :'D
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! Thank you so very much! ^^
Yeah. He is a silly guy. xD
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KayaWolf0612 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
:D yes!I love him!
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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milovanf Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
YAY! New page has arrive.
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