Hi! I'm writing this critique because I noticed that I haven't yet written a critique for you, as far as I know, although I have been watching you for a while! As for Onward, I won't give much feedback on the story and characters, I have to tell that I need the re-read the whole comic from the beginning, it was a while since I read the beginning and I forgot a lot. (I have been very busy lately.) You have improved so much since the beginning of the story, I'm amazed at it! I watched the speedpaint of some old cover of Onward on Youtube, I don't know how old that speedpaint video is but the comic is totally different now compared to that and of course there are more details! I love your cellshading style so much, the shades' edges are not sharp but not too soft. This shading is so good, I wish you put some more details to it, just because it's a candy to the eye! Not much, just some more fur details here and there, it would make your artwork even better!

I also like that you show the anatomy really well, the shades are well placed. It looks like you made some anatomy studies before making the comic, good job! I would mention one thing though, pay attention to the head structure, especially the muzzle when you draw the expressions! In the last panel, the brown wolf's muzzle (sorry, I keep forgetting names ._.) seems a bit out of place at the point where the muzzle meets the forehead. I would avoid making wobbly lines there (as on the headtop the fur is short) as it's confusing. This is the only thing I can point out and I don't find that really disturbing, just a small thing.
The characters's eyes are nicely stylized, I always recognize your style when I look at the wolves'eyes! Keep up the good job! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>