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Story, comic, characters and artwork © Sally-Ce 
Translation support by MacNugg :heart:

Personal note:
I'm home from school today with a nasty fever... yaay...
Oh well, at least I get some extra time to work on commissions and stuff. 'v'

Annndddd... You just don't argue with an angry Umbra. You don't.

Oh yeah! And I've changed icon haven't I? I'll keep it throughout October and on until I've made a new one. (This one was made by SolarGem!)
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Amazing! I love how the shading is, the colors blend in all perfectly!!! the lines are smooth and neat and it all just goes in all perfectly!!!! If I could I would give this drawing honestly a 1000/10 Because of how straight, and neat the line work is, and the shading blends perfectly into the colors, and the contrast is unbelievable!
The movements of the characters are spectacular, you can honestly see their emotions and their personality's very easily. This is honestly really amazing, as like all your drawings are!
I Think nothing is wrong with any of this drawing!!!!
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This is WONDERFUL! I love how each characters' expressions are, and I like how it deeply shows how they feel and how you could easily see their personality. The expressions are soo well drawn that it almost looks human-like and I love it. The shading and coloring is just outrageous. In addition, the story is glorious, I like how you make some of the events feel so exiting just like a movie. Not trying to rush you,sometimes I get a little impatient but i do also understand the school work your gong through and i'm looking forward into your future pages. Because of this, every other Fridays are may most favorite days. ;) I don't think there is any negative things about this comic so far that you need to change because like I said, this is Wonderful. Even though I wrote this at November 2nd, i'll give you a late HAPPY HALLOWEEN! :3
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GabsterPaws Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2017  Hobbyist Filmographer
HOLY SHIT! THIS COMIC IS AMAING! I"M SO GLAD I CAME ACROSS IT!!! AND ALSO... WHEN YOU MAKE THE NICE ONE ANGRY,SHIT GETS REALL!!! AHHHH!!! AWESOMMEE!!!!:powerwoot: 
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TwilaTheWingedCat Featured By Owner Edited Nov 11, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Zarhe! Your ears shrunk  *Dramatic gasp*


Great page, the shading is awesome. How are you this good at drawing? La la la la 
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ponigirl100 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2016
Oi Sally! R u alright? ;0; <3
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, nah, I'm super stressed atm. :'D But generally, yes. ^^
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ponigirl100 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2016
Can't wait for the next page Today is November 9th!!! <333
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry, I wrote the wrong date... ;n;
It's going to be up by tomorrow tho! <333
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MarikNova Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2016
Hey, Sally! May I ask you something about Umbra? She is not talking but can she growl, yelp or howl? Or she is always silent? If it's not a secret, of course!
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DragonSpirit10 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2016
Well her ref sheet says she has a problem with vocal cords so I don't think she can produce any sound 
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MarikNova Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2016
 That's probably true.
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pup-fu Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Rubigo even sheltered zewiac from zarhe attack :O! And meya just laid in the grasses like jelly XD

Umbra face like "shut up your bloody hell mumbles, mother's gonna fucking kill us, or I will!" And zarhe face like "uh... Whoops" :rofl:
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silver-moonwolf Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2016  Student General Artist
Oh shit, Umbra's pissed
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Aldecaalfi Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
She just needed to see Umbra to know that she has gone to far, and I like it, Ironical how she just need a glance to stop.

Great job with the expressions as always!
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warriorsofanimals Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
nice expressions
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Copperlight Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Woahw, Umbra... it's amazing to see how she gets angry and how her expression says, "shut your mouth, you're going to far Zarhe..." but when I think about it, she don't seems to be angry, but disappointed in Zarhe, that she overreacts like that... she just wants to stop her insults her brother... and I think it's amazing how Zarhe reacts, that she's only listen to her...

awesome page! <3
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warriorsofanimals Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah Zarhe's reaction is great
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GalaxyCatReporting Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You know when Umbras mad at you you done fucked up
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CallmeBACON Featured By Owner Edited Oct 30, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow... I don't know why but her face looking normal and not totaly crazy just kind of looks weird to me... Oh well... She looks like a totally different person/wolf >:"} It just astounds me how you are able to show how many different emotions are going on in her mind with just two Changes in her facial expression. I wish i had your talent! :) (Smile) :D (Big Grin) Blush Neko Emoji-16 (Blush) [V1] Llama Emoji-02 (Blush) [V1] Excited Blush blush icon Bill Cipher blush kawai eye pikachu Rup cheeks plz 
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StardustMoonlight1 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
O H SHIT 
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CallmeBACON Featured By Owner Edited Oct 30, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
WADDAP. Dat Boi is triggered dat boi ITS DAT BOI (OSHITWADDUP) ICON 
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StardustMoonlight1 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
just what i was thinking 
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CallmeBACON Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
lol, i said WADDAR... *Facepalm *WADDAP*
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StardustMoonlight1 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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SoloEchoe Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow the way Zahre's face changed between those panels was just amoozing. She looks like a completely different wolf.








I have a confession. When I first found the comic I thought Meya was a male until I saw her name ^^;
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Joshschreckengast Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2016
Uh oh wake up call better be nice wolf or umbra gonna cum unglue on you
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theWOLFIFTHENIGHT Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Woah even umbra is angry...Zarhe you better shape up
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Spacellama55 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
WHEN U GOTTA WAIT 2 WEEKS, RIP
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demonchild19me Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I know right? Umbra tis my favorite character >w<
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Snivystorm15 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
[Even Umbra knows you've gone too far Zarhe...]
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XxSnoWolfxX Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love the change from anger to sadness on zarhe. She looks so flustered and furious with her fur up and that glare but after looking at umbra she just looks so submissive
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Snivine444 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2016  Student General Artist
awww that expression in the last panel~!! >w<
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silverwolvesarecool Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2016
Umbra does not look pleased XD
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leaf-dog Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2016
Oh goodness, Umbra is adorable when she's angry! Then again, she's adorable all the time, so that shouldn't be a surprise. Lovely page!
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uni221 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2016
when Zarhe is sad or submissive she looks more feminine. I'm also concerned that Meya may be dead.
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thunder1357 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2016
i thought umbra was mute
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Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
She is! ^^ Rubigo is the one who shouts! :) Umbra shouts internally.
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thunder1357 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2016
Oh...... Oh that makes alot more sense thank you
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masky66 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2016
If you're talking about the "Stop it Zarhe" part that isn't Umbra speaking that is the other one [I can't remember his name]
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InTimber Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2016
Meanwhile, Meya is still on the floor flat as a pancake. XD
I know that's not supposed to be funny [or is it?] but I'm not sure if, according to natural canine anatomy, her legs could be positioned in such a way.
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InTimber Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2016
I have been corrected by corgis. xD
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JettTheWolf696 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2016  Student Photographer
Lol my dog does that
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Isobelg Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2016
Umbra's face.
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Wylfen Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awwww Umbra is such a cutie
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XeekyXeek Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OH MAN
WHEN YOU SEE UMBRA ANGRY YOU KNOW SOMETHING'S UP
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NatalieMalfoy87 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2016  Student Artist
>:3
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